I just joined the Writer's Cafe community online ^^
Where I can share my amateur writings with others and get feedback to improve!
Also, I just entered my first ever story writing competition today!
'cause it looked interesting, whereby the moderator gives a starter line,
"She/He was standing there with no clothes"
and we have to cook up a story from there :D
I saw the 2 other entries, 1 was kind of plain to me about husband and wife, but the other was captivating and mystical! It made me feel calm and smile when it ended! Sadly, his spelling and grammar aren't as strong as the 1st story I read, making me stumble a little as I read it, but I loved it! There was some symbolism or something..?
I dunno, I'm not very literature..
So here's a bit of what I wrote!
She was standing there without any clothes, panting heavily as she paused for breath.
There was no time to grab what little she had.
There was no other chance for her to break free.
This time, for sure, she will succeed.
A field of daffodils, that could have bloomed ever so radiantly, cruelly scorched dry by Sun's rays, lacking in water, left to die. Slowly.
She must succeed.
Byebye!!
http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/TsukishimaFuyumi/1093816/
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